Imperial MBA Essay Tips

Hello Alex,

Decided to post my deferred MBA specification after binging the Clear Admit podcast with you and Graham. Love the show and thank you for providing valuable, anecdotal advice for the world's aspiring MBA students!

I'm planning to apply to the aforementioned MBA programs as a deferred applicant, looking to obtain some work experience before matriculation.

I am currently in my senior year at a top 2 public university in California, majoring in a social science. I originally transferred from my local community college with a 4.0, and will most likely finish out my current quarter at the four-year university with the same GPA.

Ever since the beginning of community college, I have been involved in student organizations: I was the president of a business leaders student org, and a treasurer for an honors society during community college. I am also a founding member and VP of an economics club at my four-year university.

In addition, from the beginning of high school to before I transferred to a four-year university (6+ years), I volunteered and founded a recruitment program at my local senior center that harbored over 100 new volunteers. While the org was not an NGO, it did provide caregiving services for senior citizens in our local community.

I have had 3 wealth management internships: a top 10 mega RIA, a boutique firm, and a top 5 wirehouse. I have a return offer, which I plan to pursue, from the wirehouse and plan to partner with a senior advisor as an associate advisor on a 1.3B+ AUM portfolio. This will involve financial advisory and investment management services for UHNW clients, but I also foresee greater involvement and client ownership as I obtain my requisite designations.

I also founded a social enterprise that has received over 200K in pre-seed angel investment funding. I am working with a lean group of software engineers and social scientists to supply affordable business consulting and accounting for small businesses. While the startup is still in the seed stage, I plan to continue working on this throughout my pre-MBA career alongside my role in wealth management.

Not sure if this is relevant or something I should include in my application, but I also had a few side gigs during school to help pay for tuition. I worked as a server for over 3 years during the latter half of high school and throughout community college. I was also an account analyst in the university's department of wealth management during the first year. Then, I picked up an AI data annotation gig for the second year. One of the main reasons for choosing community college after high school was the cost savings, so it was imperative that I worked during college to help pay for tuition.

My intention in obtaining an MBA is to learn more about entrepreneurship or social entrepreneurship, looking to combine the explosion in the current tech/AI market with social impact. Also looking to learn management fundamentals for mid/late-stage startups.

While I do not have a test score at the moment, I do plan to take the GMAT Focus at the end of the month. I am hoping to get around the median scores of the M7; 685+. Also hoping to crush the quant component of the GMAT to mitigate quantitative doubts, but hopefully, some of my internship experiences with investment management help. I also took some entrepreneurship classes at the four-year university that involved accounting principles.

Looking for some advice on whether I am aiming too high. I am almost viewing my deferred application as an opportunity to shoot for the stars, but at the same time, I don't want to fall too hard. Any other advice on how to clean up my application is also welcome!

GPA: 4.0 Undergrad (Business Admin/Accounting)

Work Experience: 8 Years as an IT Director/Information Security Director

Test Results: Hoping to get a waiver but am willing to take an exam

Targeted Programs: Hoping to get into Kellogg Part-Time/Evening/Accelerated Full-Time, or Stanford preferred but open to options

I also do have my PMP and CISSP, which are not relevant pre se but was asked if I had one before. I am going to get CPA once I finish MBA or part of MBA due to state requirements. I am also white and have owned businesses and do have copyrights and trademarks due to a brand I own.

Does this profile seem good enough? I did have one of the admissions officers ask why even get an MBA, but I want one, and feel they are valuable. Also, scholarships would be cool but plan on self-funding if scholarships are unavailable.