Full Videos: The Sept./Oct. Essay Insight Series
To get into the business school of your choice, it’s important that you show the admissions committee who you really are. The best place to express yourself on the MBA application, of course, is in the essay portion. In MBA admissions essays, prospective candidates have the opportunity to tell the admissions team everything they need to know about who the individual is and how they would contribute to a specific program. We understand that it can be difficult to determine everything to say in an MBA essay — so we’re back to give you some essay insight and to help you navigate the process.
We brought back our popular MBA Essay Insight Event Series to help MBA applicants succeed in the essay portion of their business school applications. During the series, Clear Admit hosts three webinars with panelists from leading b-schools. Keep reading to see what we discussed during these three events.
Clear Admit’s MBA Essay Insight Event Series
The following topics will be addressed throughout the series:
- How admissions teams develop essay prompts
- Characteristics of an effective essay
- How to approach or start an essay
- How essays fit into the review of the larger MBA application
…and more advice to help applicants put their best foot forward during the MBA admissions process.
Full Videos: September/October Events
On September 22nd, we welcomed five admissions representatives to offer advice about the essay portion of the MBA application process. Panelists included Eric Askins, Executive Director of Full-Time Admissions at Berkeley Haas School of Business; Lica Hertz, Assistant Director of MBA Admissions at UNC Kenan-Flagler Business School; Jade Kinsman, Assistant Director of Admissions & Financial Aid at Cornell SC Johnson College of Business; Amanda Carlson, Assistant Dean of Admissions at Columbia Business School; and Diana Economy, Director of Full-Time MBA Admissions at Stephen M. Ross School of Business.
Watch this video to catch up on the September 22 essay insight event:
On September 29th, we welcomed five more admissions representatives to offer their insight about MBA essays. Panelists included Gina Cecchetti, Associate Director of Master’s Admissions at Carnegie Mellon University; Allison Jamison, Assistant Dean of Admissions at Duke’s Fuqua School of Business; Laurel Grodman, Managing Director of Admissions at Yale School of Management; Rodrigo Malta, Managing Director of MBA Marketing, Recruiting, & Admissions at McCombs School of Business; and John Lee, Associate Director of MBA Admissions at UCLA Anderson School of Management.
Watch the video below to catch up on the September 29th webinar:
During the final event on October 6th, we welcomed five more admissions representatives to provide advice regarding writing MBA essays. The panelists included Donna Swinford, Associate Dean for Student Recruitment and Admissions, MBA Programs at The University of Chicago Booth School of Business; Lauren Calio, Director of MBA Admissions at NYU Stern School of Business; David Simpson, Recruitment & Admissions Director, MBA & Masters in Finance at London Business School; Kirsten Moss, Assistant Dean and Director of MBA Admissions & Financial Aid at Stanford Graduate School of Business; and Virginie Fougea, Global Director of Admissions & Financial Aid at INSEAD.
Watch the video below to see the last part of the Sept./Oct. MBA Essay Insight Event Series:
MBA Applywire
Undergrad
Engineering Majors from BITS Pilani (Tier-1 school in India), Minors in Finance and Accounting.
8.12/10.0 GPA in Majors, 8.0/10.0 in Minors
Extra Curricular
> Lead Fellow with a national academic NGO (Academic Yr 2026-2027)
> Teaching Volunteer with a national Academic NGO (Academic Yr 2025-2026)
> Captain - Football Team at Undergrad University + Captain - Football Team in School
Positioning/Story
> Strong academic foundations and interest in Finance (Minors + Internship) and immersive experience moving the needle for Startups to IPO companies with deep technology exposure across B2C and B2B environments.
> Collaborative and stakeholder management-driven work experience throughout, professionally and personally - driving impact to the under-served sections of the society (NGO) + Leading the team in sports through teenage to adulthood.
Specific Questions -
1. How am I positioned for Kellogg (FT or MMM), booth (MBA/MS), Haas (MBA/MEng), Columbia (MBA/MS) ? Will Dual degrees give me a slight edge over the FT MBAs?
2. How am I placed for top EU/UK? Tailoring applications here with VC goal than the PM leadership.
3. What T15s should I consider? Presently considering Fuqua, Cornell, Stern 2yr (Not considering 1yr Tech MBAs - (Stern, Cornell Tech) as I want to leverage the internship).
I have about 4 years of experience at a financial derivatives advisory firm, where I'm a Vice President advising real estate and equipment-finance clients on hedging strategies. My firm is very small. which means, I am asked to take leadership roles. For example, I lead our largest client relationship, and I get to present to clients' executives and investors. Before this, I had one year in a mid size public sector consulting firm and before that, I had a year of service in the AmeriCorps, working in homelessness services.
I have a 3.58 GPA from a good but not top tier public university. At graduation I have 150 credits, which meant I was able to graduate with two bachelors degrees. They were a B.S. in Math and Economics, and a B.A. in History.
Outside of work, I volunteer roughly 120 hours a year with a hunger-relief nonprofit a and serve as a junior board member. I also organized my company's first ever annual day of service, which we've continued for 3 years. My personal interests include collecting vinyl records, and learning ancient History.
Post-MBA, I want to build on my background in real estate capital markets to move into banking on the lending side, with a particular focus on real estate. I like the real estate world, but I want to work at a bank as I think a larger institution would provide more opportunities for growth in the larger world of finance.
I am struggling to decide which schools to apply to. I keep adding programs to my list, and I already think my list is too high. My brother wants me to apply to Stanford because he's moving to the Bay Area, but I don't think I'd be competitive. My dream school is Wharton, but I think it's a long shot.
Also, in case it's relevant, I am a 28 year old White male from Pennsylvania, and a member of the LGBTQ community.
My low cgpa was as a result of working part time during my undergrad to cover my expenses and mostly for experience. Parent's business run into financial challenges made things difficult because i had to pay my fees. had CGPA of 3.0+ in 3rd and 4th year in my undergrad(60 credit hours). currently work in commercial bank in CX with 4yrs Work Exp. It will be 6yrs when I apply for the MBA ,I will be promoted to a different unit soon. pro bono consulting for young entrepreneurs. Led youth groups at church and organize capacity building events.
Plan on writing the GRE with 330 as target.
Hoping for a significant scholarship
1. I want advise on how to build my profile to make me an ideal candidate for R1 acceptance and $$$
I have worked for over 10 years in sales and business development and I am currently completing a PostGraduate Diploma in Banking and Finance and I need an a good MBA to enable me pivot into financial services.
Currently working in consulting with a major FMCG/alcobev client, mainly across analytics, supply, and business problem-solving work. Over time, I’ve realized I enjoy understanding why problems exist within organizations and how teams, systems, and decisions can work better together, which is what’s pushing me towards strategy consulting and an MBA.
A lot of my interest in business also comes from seeing how everyday products and operations work behind the scenes. Outside work, I co-founded and ran a digital literacy initiative (1yr 2mo) during COVID where we helped elderly individuals and women from underserved communities learn basic digital tools to stay connected and manage daily activities during lockdown.
I’m currently preparing for the GMAT and exploring schools such as LBS, Fuqua, Ross, Tuck, and a few reach schools depending on how the score progresses.
MBA LiveWire
Wild journey since getting Waitlisted post-interview Round 1. Gave several updates, and got the phone call on 5/22. Had to decline it because they gave no $ and I'm holding a very good scholarship at Johnson. Best of luck to those still waiting, but if you get off the list be ready to pay sticker price.


